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... My editor asked me to clear up the chronology of a single sentence and I spent twenty minutes rewriting the paragraph.
2009-03-21
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The problem is not insufficiently good writing. The problem is insufficiently thorough thinking. This is a thing that takes time to fix.
For a moment I wish I were a Hollywood screenwriter so that no one would care about massive plot holes (let alone minor places where the plot needs darning.)
For a moment I wish I were a Hollywood screenwriter so that no one would care about massive plot holes (let alone minor places where the plot needs darning.)